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A Winterlude

byKoba©
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by Anonymous

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by Ashesh912/17/13

Read with me

& share my poetry ......
On a cold , dark night !
5-ed .

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by butters12/18/13

quite beautiful

and the title only adds to that

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by Oldbear6312/18/13

Beautiful

Descriptions and emotions. Very, very nice.

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by demure10112/19/13

Beautiful

the idea in the last stanza does raise the hairs in my neck - for two reasons...

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