Apart from the one minor flaw that the characters met each other exactly four years ago instead of five, I thought the story was well done. In particular, the first half (minus the erotic bits) really had an incredible atmosphere about them that reminds me of Bradbury's short Kaleidoscope. Really really cool. This is the first time I've ever left a comment here but you've earned it.
I'm going to edit the story to change the five years to four. Oops.
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Anonymous12/21/13
A nice little change
It's not a smoking hot, young stud with huge cock screws the crap out of a tight little barely legal big titted angel. It's much better than that, and shows some imagination. Thanks for submitting - I enjoyed it!
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Anonymous12/21/13
Very Good
The most intriguing story I've read in a while. Very nice story.
English
just bad
Apart from the one minor flaw that the characters met each other exactly four years ago instead of five, I thought the story was well done. In particular, the first half (minus the erotic bits) really had an incredible atmosphere about them that reminds me of Bradbury's short Kaleidoscope. Really really cool. This is the first time I've ever left a comment here but you've earned it.
One big YAWN!
Time error
I'm going to edit the story to change the five years to four. Oops.
A nice little change
It's not a smoking hot, young stud with huge cock screws the crap out of a tight little barely legal big titted angel. It's much better than that, and shows some imagination. Thanks for submitting - I enjoyed it!
Very Good
The most intriguing story I've read in a while. Very nice story.
Liked it
Liked it, but it seems I've read a story like this before not too long ago.
Total rubbish
Never read anything so badly written a "0" if I could its that bad
Funny how Anonymous always has the snarky comments...
Most enjoyable read...
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