They are "in lust" not in love. They didn't even like each other before they started fucking. Its just lust I enjoy reading about it but thats all it is. Its not like they were close before the sex they just lived in the same house & argued. They can fall in love but right now its just fucking & being "in lust".
This was a superb series. I don't agree with the comment that they didn't like each other at the beginning: they were already close, and the sexual relationship transformed everything. I think they will need to find a way of making this relationship both permanent and exclusive. I hope there will be more episodes.
I believe they're in love. Sure, they were typically at each others' throats growing up, but he did say in the first chapter that he loved her still; if anyone tried to fuck with her, he'd defend her immediately. Only he was allowed to be mean to her, just like with most siblings. But, you can fall in love with anyone within a matter of a day. So, for them to be in love with each other isn't unbelievable at all.
That said, this is a fucking amazing story. Only minor spelling/grammatical errors that are easily fixed. Keep it up! I can't wait for chapter 8!
The whole series was a joy to read and makes me want to know where the rest of their lives go. However the creeping in of the reality of their situation added a sad aspect to what became a great love story. I understand that their forbidden love would cause them problems but a happy ending with them together as a real couple would not need to drag the realms of plausability too far to be sucessful. So please, maybe a final chapter or two to please the old romantics amoungst us? Once again, a brilliant set of stories where you delt with the topic of incest (sibcest) very well; maybe you should try a parent/offspring next?
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They are "in lust" not in love. They didn't even like each other before they started fucking. Its just lust I enjoy reading about it but thats all it is. Its not like they were close before the sex they just lived in the same house & argued. They can fall in love but right now its just fucking & being "in lust".
too predictble
Superb series
This was a superb series. I don't agree with the comment that they didn't like each other at the beginning: they were already close, and the sexual relationship transformed everything. I think they will need to find a way of making this relationship both permanent and exclusive. I hope there will be more episodes.
too much sex in one night .. guess he had a viagra or some thing
I believe they're in love. Sure, they were typically at each others' throats growing up, but he did say in the first chapter that he loved her still; if anyone tried to fuck with her, he'd defend her immediately. Only he was allowed to be mean to her, just like with most siblings. But, you can fall in love with anyone within a matter of a day. So, for them to be in love with each other isn't unbelievable at all.
That said, this is a fucking amazing story. Only minor spelling/grammatical errors that are easily fixed. Keep it up! I can't wait for chapter 8!
A couple more
I really don't think it was to much sex some of us were athletes.How the mighty have fallen getting old sucks.
Brilliant!
The whole series was a joy to read and makes me want to know where the rest of their lives go. However the creeping in of the reality of their situation added a sad aspect to what became a great love story. I understand that their forbidden love would cause them problems but a happy ending with them together as a real couple would not need to drag the realms of plausability too far to be sucessful. So please, maybe a final chapter or two to please the old romantics amoungst us? Once again, a brilliant set of stories where you delt with the topic of incest (sibcest) very well; maybe you should try a parent/offspring next?
sorry, but calling her his little whore
is NOT how you pledge your never ending love.
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