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by coffinbait12/21/13

Love it!

This reminds me of reading the black dagger brotherhood novels if you haven't read them yet you so should the sex is great and the characters are amazing! I loved your story too I hope to hear more!

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by willieone12/21/13

Beautiful

Thankyou for posting this beautiful story. Hope to read more of these two after the she is changed but if not this did make a great stand alone or maybe a chapter one..hint!

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by Anonymous10/25/14

Lovely story

I'd love a longer, more fleshed-out version of this, with more of their individual POVs, maybe draw in a couple more characters whose stories would be told over the following chapters... Oh, yeah, and I loved the story - guess you could tell!

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