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Ehhhh!!!!
What on earth happened to the rest of the story? it was just warming up nicely?
That was just beginning to be really good and then ...
... no more! What a disappointing non-end to what was shaping up so well. Do bring us the proper ending and I'll make four stars into five!
Who is Tim??
Midway through Brian became Tim?? I agree that this could easily have continued into the upcoming blossoming of Clarissa's sex life and perhaps a righteous involvement by Marie~~ Overall, short and sweet!!
Huge potential lost
This had the potential to be one of your best works yet and you ended it waaay too early. This screams for a continuation.
Rated 3 Considering no ending...
Either do a page 2 or 3 or quit writing these stories. You've got a lot of quantity stores...now pick up your quality.
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