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by butters12/18/13

laughing x buzzing minds :)

like a graph
two lines
in different colours
one the shape of a rollercoaster
the second
a smooth, steady ascension
the trend is up, always up
the peaks and troughs
just part of the ride

as for arrows - they don't hurt a bit
unless they get torn out

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by twelveoone12/19/13

I'm going to

ignore the arrow, trust me, you know the way my mind works
zero in on these two lines:
led away to the tilt-a-whirl, spun, circumnavigated,
and as I became cognizant once again,
very generally speaking "circumnavigated", and "cognizant" would be words to avoid, however, here it adds to the sense of vertigo, now do you need "once"?
5ed

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by Ashesh912/19/13

Arrow between her breasts 'n 'nother between your eyes : Harry were U born under

The sign of the Archer : Saggitarius ? 5-ed ( BTW today it's a virtual feast for the discernin' reader with U , GM , Dem all bursting on the NP screen together : Merry Christmas !)

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