Oh the build up is started! What a Christmas gift Susan!
The build-up and play by play dialogue is fantastic, this is what foreplay is supposed to be about, not wham-bam in and out sex with some woman screaming her orgasmic bliss and the guy coming a bucket full all over inside and out of her hot body. Susan Jill Parker you are a goddess with imagination and words, this series has got to be one of your best, even though you are my favorite author, it's erotical magic that comes from your fertile and educated mind-educated in the sense of a professional writer, not you sexual experience(s). THANKS for making mine and all the other readers Christmas Eve beautiful, I know I'll be dreaming of more than sugar plums in my head tonight and with your talent you will know what! :) jaybird
I wish these came out early in morning!
I love the way SJP sets things up.......keep it coming, writing is all about you
Oh the build up is started! What a Christmas gift Susan!
The build-up and play by play dialogue is fantastic, this is what foreplay is supposed to be about, not wham-bam in and out sex with some woman screaming her orgasmic bliss and the guy coming a bucket full all over inside and out of her hot body. Susan Jill Parker you are a goddess with imagination and words, this series has got to be one of your best, even though you are my favorite author, it's erotical magic that comes from your fertile and educated mind-educated in the sense of a professional writer, not you sexual experience(s). THANKS for making mine and all the other readers Christmas Eve beautiful, I know I'll be dreaming of more than sugar plums in my head tonight and with your talent you will know what! :) jaybird
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