It never fails that the naysayers who only give only negative comments to demean other people, are to lame to sign a post with anything besides Anonymous. Forget them.
I think it was a good story. Good grammar and spelling. You could deal somewhat more with his pain and humiliation. Looking forward to the continuation.
by
Anonymous12/29/13
Hey Honeylicker!!
The score for this mess is less than 1.5 which may be a record in futility. Seems to me the anons might be the smart ones when looking at this train wreck and calls into question your brainpower. Besides is your name really honeylicker? Thought not. Just as anon as the anons.Hypocrite
One point that Hubby does NOT mention is WHY he is staying in this train-wreck of a marriage! Yeah, she got his cherry (but he didn't get hers) and enjoyed sex with her, but it was when he THOUGHT she was getting a lot out of their Magic Minute! He now knows she does NOT, and probably never did! It is certainly unknown why Sweetie married a guy (not reported as rich or handsome) who was so sexually inept. Or why she was then so tentative about admitting her disdain for his wussy ass!
But back to Hubby. If he still likes her, why not just move on and let her find what she's looking for! He just MIGHT find a woman who likes what he can provide! He obviously won't in this relationship!
Weak husband loses wife to stronger man. It's not a true story, it's fiction, made up. But it could be true and these are some of the husband's emotions. It will end in divorce as happens to cheaters, but it has not happened here yet.
Some comments seem to read as if this is a news item, it's not.
by
Anonymous12/29/13
Always a treat
I love reading the angry comments left by the poor self-deluded saps who found themselves strangely aroused by a cuckolding story, beat off to it, then found themselves awash in such confusion and guilt that they had to lash out at the story's author. Presumably they've all been cheated on, because they clearly can't satisfy their wives and girlfriends, but instead of enjoying a safe little fantasy about their shortcomings they "force" themselves to read every naughty, naughty word, then flounce off to have a little anonymous hissy fit in the comments. Such naked psychology is pure gold, every time. Keep it up, lads! (But I do hope y'all come to terms with your own closeted desires, for your own sakes.)
by
Anonymous12/30/13
Hey Always a Treat!
I love you trolls that read the comments and then have the audacity to bitch about them.You say nothing about the story at all. What the fuck does that make you?Talk about a loser.At least the other commenters say something either pro or con about what the author wrote. All you did was spout vitriol about an OPINION you putz! BTW This story sucked. Patheically predictable cuckold gatbage that has totally infested this site and for the most part does not appeal to most people that read here. Then again alwayss a treat nobody knows what you feel about the story.
Thought it was exciting. It needs more emotion though, and more details of her sluttyness.
by
Anonymous12/30/13
Good job, "Always a treat"
You can always tell when you touched a nerve when the trolls start making typos in their ranting responses. (I should say "troll", because it's obviously one guy. One obsessed, bitter, sad guy who's been cheated on and can't deal with the fact that he gets off on it.)
by
Anonymous12/30/13
Unpleasant
I gave it one star because I find adultery to be totally repulsive.
by
Anonymous12/30/13
Yeah, seriously
What is it about cuckold stories that brings out the angry, pathetic nutjobs? It makes no sense for them to spend so much time reading, reviewing, and ranting about a genre they claim they don't enjoy. I don't go to their pedo-coprophagia fetish sites and post about how disgusting I find them; why do they come here and complain about clearly labeled cuckold porn? Unless they secretly wank like crazy about it, then spew rants in the comments to hide their guilt.
Good story, you've managed to capture the angst of a cuck, watching his wife gradually turn into the sort of slut he always wanted, but won't admit it!
by
Anonymous02/04/14
cuckold win's
This is a good chance for the cuckold to win for a chance.
English
Congrads!!!
Pathetically bad and predictable. You do realize this is NOT erotic.Right? MIght be better posted in fetish
Hubby is a wussy
He did not even object? Come on... Even a total whipped cuck would fight a little....
Just awful
Another spineless wimp. Could you have made it any less interesting?
Good story
It never fails that the naysayers who only give only negative comments to demean other people, are to lame to sign a post with anything besides Anonymous. Forget them.
I think it was a good story. Good grammar and spelling. You could deal somewhat more with his pain and humiliation. Looking forward to the continuation.
Hey Honeylicker!!
The score for this mess is less than 1.5 which may be a record in futility. Seems to me the anons might be the smart ones when looking at this train wreck and calls into question your brainpower. Besides is your name really honeylicker? Thought not. Just as anon as the anons.Hypocrite
Why?
One point that Hubby does NOT mention is WHY he is staying in this train-wreck of a marriage! Yeah, she got his cherry (but he didn't get hers) and enjoyed sex with her, but it was when he THOUGHT she was getting a lot out of their Magic Minute! He now knows she does NOT, and probably never did! It is certainly unknown why Sweetie married a guy (not reported as rich or handsome) who was so sexually inept. Or why she was then so tentative about admitting her disdain for his wussy ass!
But back to Hubby. If he still likes her, why not just move on and let her find what she's looking for! He just MIGHT find a woman who likes what he can provide! He obviously won't in this relationship!
Good story about a bad subject
Weak husband loses wife to stronger man. It's not a true story, it's fiction, made up. But it could be true and these are some of the husband's emotions. It will end in divorce as happens to cheaters, but it has not happened here yet.
Some comments seem to read as if this is a news item, it's not.
Always a treat
I love reading the angry comments left by the poor self-deluded saps who found themselves strangely aroused by a cuckolding story, beat off to it, then found themselves awash in such confusion and guilt that they had to lash out at the story's author. Presumably they've all been cheated on, because they clearly can't satisfy their wives and girlfriends, but instead of enjoying a safe little fantasy about their shortcomings they "force" themselves to read every naughty, naughty word, then flounce off to have a little anonymous hissy fit in the comments. Such naked psychology is pure gold, every time. Keep it up, lads! (But I do hope y'all come to terms with your own closeted desires, for your own sakes.)
Hey Always a Treat!
I love you trolls that read the comments and then have the audacity to bitch about them.You say nothing about the story at all. What the fuck does that make you?Talk about a loser.At least the other commenters say something either pro or con about what the author wrote. All you did was spout vitriol about an OPINION you putz! BTW This story sucked. Patheically predictable cuckold gatbage that has totally infested this site and for the most part does not appeal to most people that read here. Then again alwayss a treat nobody knows what you feel about the story.
I liked it
Thought it was exciting. It needs more emotion though, and more details of her sluttyness.
Good job, "Always a treat"
You can always tell when you touched a nerve when the trolls start making typos in their ranting responses. (I should say "troll", because it's obviously one guy. One obsessed, bitter, sad guy who's been cheated on and can't deal with the fact that he gets off on it.)
Unpleasant
I gave it one star because I find adultery to be totally repulsive.
Yeah, seriously
What is it about cuckold stories that brings out the angry, pathetic nutjobs? It makes no sense for them to spend so much time reading, reviewing, and ranting about a genre they claim they don't enjoy. I don't go to their pedo-coprophagia fetish sites and post about how disgusting I find them; why do they come here and complain about clearly labeled cuckold porn? Unless they secretly wank like crazy about it, then spew rants in the comments to hide their guilt.
Good story, you've managed to capture the angst of a cuck, watching his wife gradually turn into the sort of slut he always wanted, but won't admit it!
cuckold win's
This is a good chance for the cuckold to win for a chance.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to My Journey to Cuckold or
More submissions by reverdemoi.