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Great.
Worth the wait as always.
NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jaz!!!!!!!!!!!
Leave us hanging why dont you??? haha
Great chapter, cant wait till the next one
Thank God for you!!!!
It is always a refreshing moment when I see a new chapter from you. There are times when I am angered by a character or circumstance is a story, but I always appreciate the way you make me emotional & vested. Thanks for the new chapter. Liam is smiling, Elina is near but not being her cousin's buffer. We have an un-named evil entity and a reluctant vampire. An oxymoron and a almost super ancient. Fun, fun, fun!!!! Happy Holidays and may the new year bring you peace, prosperity, great health and a long time enjoying it all.
What can I say but.....
Superb,brilliant,wonderful,addictive,awesome,frust rating and a bloody good read! Thanks for posting look forward to more!!!!
With Annie and Caleb getting back to normal the rest of the "family" seems to be coming together also. Reassa and Liam are going to start working together and although Reassa doesn't yet realize it she going to fall in love. D. is getting the last of the poison so a cure/antidote can be made. What appears to be calm on the surface is really preparation for the battle ahead. Yet at the same time is moving for the V children, now adults , seem to be leading the future not only the unique powers but also w/babies coming and new love/lovers being discovered.......
Thanks for sharing....looking forward to more
I think you could write 50 pages long in one chapter and the answer would still be too short need more!
Excellent as always, your characters just keep getting better and more complex but still so easy to follow.
Thank You
Yours is one of the few series I actively watch for. Thank You for the Christmas present!
MERRY CHRISTMAS
LOVED IT.
Can't help but wonder.
I can't help but wonder when they are all going to realize that the absent alpha bond for Mac is actually with Kallum. I completely immersed myself in this whole series for the last 4 days reading it all the way through and have loved every thing about it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
merry christmas
Yay! Another update! Love it Jaz... as usual. And love u too! Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
Thanks for the holiday gift!
They're not my favourite couple but I'm happy to see the story moving forwards. Looking forward to more in the new year!
Merry Christmas
I finally got a gift I really wanted. Maybe it's just me, but I like Reesa. She is so strong and brave. Liam is just what she needs. Please bring Karn and Elina together soon. Love that dynamic. Kothari and Dara also needs time together. Speculating here, but Kallum's mate is a wolf. Anxiously awaiting chapter 13.
Christmas Present
Thank you Jazz! Look forward to more chapters. You have such a gift.
Your mind is amazing to come up with such stories! Hope you have a wonderful holiday and a bright new year filled with more of your stories for your hungry fans.
Meeeerrrrry Christmas!
Thank you for once again exceeding my expectations! Love you to death. (Well not really to death but you know what I mean) Excellent work!
Merry Christmas
and thank you for this wonderful update looking forward to the next chapter
Thanks Jaz, Merry Xmas to you as well!
Awesome update per the usual, looking forward to the follow up. Have a wonderful Xmas & Boxing Day. I am looking forward to following many more of your adventures in 2014!
Ha!
Merry Christmas to you too!
Love Love Love
Love Love Love!!
Yay!!!
Impeccable, as always!! Thank you & Merry Christmas!!!
Merry Christmas!
What a wonderful Christmas present!
Happy , happy Christmas day!
Thank you for this chapter that appeared just in time, like a gift! Of course, your stories are always a treat to read.
Aaaaaahhhhhhh!
Merry Christmas one and all!
I absolutely loved this chapter and hope to read more soon. It's good that they were able to force Reasa to see that what she has done to others is not so different than what has been done to her. Furthermore, I hope she grows as a person and treats people ( especially Liam) better in future chapters.
Yey!
Merry Christmas Jazz!
What a wonderful gift to your fans.
Awesome chapter as always! God bless!
New reason to love Christmas..... Hot Damn! Thank you for this awesome addition!!!!
*drool
hmmm
i do think that the Europeans are in for a surprise( and a change in leadership) and i just love how Liam is being written( goofy kid for all intents and purposes ) but as one who also ,( and this is just my humble opinion) actually is aware that he might be the most powerful( on the mental power plain) of any on the earth( even Annie and Caleb might not be he equal) , and again, my opinion, that when push comes to shove, the varcolac , are going to make a pissed of Annie look like younglings ( i do not think, Even as jazz writes them, ) that the power of them, as collective , has even been hinted at
Merry Christmas Jazz, & Happy New Year!!
Love this story, Thank You!!!
Thank you
I await each and every single one of your uploads with such excitement.
I finish reading a good chapter and my heart contorts in knots.
NOOO!!
I have read every entry to this series in 2 weeks, and I have kids!! I didn't realize that I was so very close to the latest entry. Now I can just wait and speculate! You are a wonderful writer Jaz, I literally feel as though I've been sucked into the story and am seeing the events unfold! Thank you for sharing your talent with us, now to anxiously await the next chapter!
Five *****, as usual!
I have held off reading this chapter as long as possible, a little like self flagellation; and I am happy and sad. It is like having a glass of the finest wine and when holding it up for seconds, being told "I am sorry, we just ran out. Could I offer you ..."
Please when is the next
Please when is the next chapter. I cant get enough of your books. Please can u send all the books you have written to an email. I want to be able to have your books for years coz am addicted to them. ( imeena137@gmail.com)
Thanks....
Thank you....
Happy New Year Jaz
Like everyone else I have spent the last few days re reading and catching up and now waiting.... alas... impatiently for the continuation of this brilliant series.
There is so much to look forward to.. Cass's father finding out that she has a mate in Pietro, Elina and Karn, Liam and Reasa, the most exciting part will be Dara and Kothi does she or doesn't she know he is her mate????
The big question is who is Kallum's mate? You can't partner them all off and leave their Alpha without one and when will they realize that he is the unknown Alpha??
You are one of the best writers and I can't wait... seriously can't... to see the continuation of this story
Ummm Where's The Next Chapter ? O.o?
Noooo............... *eye twitching*
ok I gotta know when the next one is coming .....
Help!!
Hep me HEP ME
As my little five year old cousin would say....
Please I need someone to help me beg, plead, solicit.appeal to jazz that I need the next chapter.
My eyes have started twitching like king julien's in the penguins of Madagascar......
Please next.
Hep me HEP me
where oh where?
Where is chapter 15????? T_T
I love all your stories...
I hope to see more chapters soon, the anticipation is killing me!!! :-)
pleaseee
I don't even want to read anything else, just the next chapter! I cant't wait!
Next chapter!
It was great to see Gypsy updated, and PLEASE, please update more of Tears!
PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
When is the next chapter coming.....I am dying here!
i like your stories a lot but dun appreciate waiting few months for an update. your readers must lose interest in your stories by waiting so long for an update
"I can wait until you're ready" LOL!
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Also if a vampire and werewolf can turn a human....
Can I hybrid turn a human into a hybrid? I'm thinking if so, maybe this is the fate of Reasa...:)
less beatific would be nice
there are so many words to use, our language is amazing, but you've over used this one word in every chapter thus far and it's always a "beatific" smile or glow
try to expand your internal dictionary a bit
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