Wasn't expecting that. It was good :) it might not sound important but it really is, your spelling and grammar were nigh flawless. It can totally ruin a good story when a reader keeps tripping over mistakes. Spoils the whole flow. Very good for a first time. Keep going :)
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Wow
That was really good. Could you write some more about Blaine and James please
Total plot twist at the end!! I loved it. Could you write more about Blaine and James in the future?
A great first story
My wish is to see this talented writer follow up this grand five star first story with many, many more.
hot
sweet little quickie there which is quite hot an explosive. loved it.
I too enjoyed the twist at the end. I enjoy a little humor now and then.
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That was wonderful! Please write more!
For a first story
that was really good.
Thoroughly enjoyed it
Very nice twist at the end
Wasn't expecting that. It was good :) it might not sound important but it really is, your spelling and grammar were nigh flawless. It can totally ruin a good story when a reader keeps tripping over mistakes. Spoils the whole flow. Very good for a first time. Keep going :)
Hot and light hearted- what's not to love?
Well done. Look forward to more.
Superbly erotic; my cock throbbed
Best.Plot twist.EVER
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