Twelfth Man

Thank you

I enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for sharing.

Ha Ha

Stupid fucking cunt. Her friend too. I normally don't care for revenge fucks, because they never work, but in this case it worked out perfectly. Just call the lawyers.
Ha

Romantic Revenge Story

When I began to read I thought I read a simple Consequence story but a good Romantic Revenge story became at the end. BTW 5*****.

CHEERIO,,,PIP PIP

and a stiff upper lip. TK U MLJ LV NV

Enjoyed

I enjoyed this story, Thank you, and a merry christmas and happy new year to you and all the other revenge/ BTB writers.

Bad Marriage

Anyone who takes a friends word about their spouses infidelity is in a lousy marriage to start with. Sure, they may or may not be the reason the marriage is weak, and sickly, but not to verify the infidelity before taking action speaks of their own flaw, not of the marriage. So, fortunately she acted foolishly and released her husband from 15 years of crap. One thing, after 15 years no kids? WTF? Why is it that anyone would stay with a nasty bitch, or a loathsome husband for that long if there were not kids? Weak point in the plot.

that kind of humor doesn't do it for me.

well written though.

Enjoyed it

A fun read. Thanks.

The revenge was pretty good, but

the extremely dull persona of the main character made this a very dry read. It was meant toe be, but like our hero, the reader simply lost interest.

Everybody gets 5 stars today!!

Merry Chriatmas!! HO HO HO

Caught and bowled!

Great story and just up my street. Loved the humor and the way it worked out.

enjoyed your story thanks 5

Well Played

It was a fun read. Thank you for sharing your work.

Loved it!

Thanks for a neat, entertaining story.

Totally Enjoyed

If you're not related to Britease I would be surprised.

Perfect, humorous and entertaining!!!

FIVE

Thanks

Very Droll

Besides being fun to say, "droll" works perfectly and adds to the dry humor of this story. I couldn't help but grin through the entire thing.
Although predictable, the ending was perfect, and perfectly delivered. By the way, there's nothing wrong with predictable as long as it is told well.

Everyone is in a good mood, today!

Sure it is smooth like a good cognac, but I wonder whether all eleven of the other players found her desirable and to their taste. Nicely written. A clean 5*

It's**

A read.

I liked it! A 5* story.

And another story set in a cricket club! There are at least three. I think we need more!

Terry Thomas

I think, for the movie, we need to resurrect Terry Thomas. Alec Guinness could not be passive-aggressive enough in this role! Got a few ideas for Sweetie, but that is not settled enough in my mind yet!

5* (and DROLL is PERFECT)

Why is it the first or maybe the second thing a person that gets cheated on wants to go have revenge sex?

Revenge sex

One big constant with a caught cheater is that you having revenge sex actually makes them feel better in the long run, because instead of "I cheated" they can choose to interpret it as "we both made mistakes"

Good stuff!

Very dry sense of humor, or as the Brits write it, "humour" with the extra u. Great tale, though. Hubby kept his cool and did what he had to do. Wifey was about as stupid as stupid cheating sluts get.

5 Big Stars.

Well done

very clever storyline and an interesting read.

Thanks

witty little ditty, thanks

well played

Caught and bowled

Cute story

Wonderful word play, I didn't even mine the plot line, which was fanciful to say the least, the back and forth dialog carried the whole thing.

Oh and "Maiden's water" never head the phrase before. Neat!

Chilley.

loved it

I absolutely loved this one. But doesn't his screwing the wives make him just as guilty as the wife?

wonderful

About the most exquisite revenge story I've read. Super! Thank you.

Very funny stuff

Got to love the "dry" wit of the bloody Brits. I noticed that Matt and Britease were especially happy with the story. I guess the Brits need to stick together with their tea and cricket. It was only missing some pints and finger sandwiches. Maybe next time. Although I must admit, when you started to talk about cricket I was waiting for a story about men in the wilds, searching under rocks for crickets to put on their hooks as fish bait. Well done, well played story. But I do have to ask about British divorce laws. If they're both screwing around, why does she have to leave? Maybe a little more information next time? Write on!

Good and Just

Good in that there was no consideration of staying with a stupid slut. Just in that balancing the scales will help him sleep at night. Of course, he is out a crummy wife, and 11 shitty friends so minus a negative equals a positive. Overall he came out far ahead!

real nice

This was actually cool. I really liked the way he was so cool about his wife's screw-up. Also how he took care of it. loved the story.

ONE RACKS AND SACKS

the other packs and backs off. TK U MLJ LV NV

LIKED THE STORY BUT NO MAN WOULD PUT UP WITH THAT SHIT FOR FIFTEEN YEARS.

The author wasted too many years of the husband's life being married to a shrew. The spiteful, overbearing bitch would have come up with a 'reason' to justify her doing what she did YEARS sooner.

Cute and entertaining!

5* from me.

SlipperySaddleBum's Comments

I think most people wouldn't put up with that for 15 minutes. lol.