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by Anonymous

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by Ashesh912/21/13

Skin communes with bass thru' old boards ---

Butters there is a multi-layerd wealth of meaning in tgese words ! High 5-ed

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by Oldbear6312/21/13

Feels good

Like bare feet on an old smooth warm wooden floor. May I have the next dance?
Merry Christmas

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by HarryHill12/21/13

there's so many ways

the mind can run with this. butter soft leaves a good feeling at the end and a smile

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by butters12/22/13

thanks, guys

looking back i think maybe using 'old' twice was a bit lazy. felt right at the time (enough so i didn't even notice till too late. our brains can trick us that way).

oldbear, i'd be delighted. thankyou :)

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