Evergreen Forest Ch. 03

Let him escape and get the upper hand.

Interesting

Looking forward to more, reminds me of manyeyedhydra

Veeeeeery interesting, please continue, I want to see where the story goes.

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Interesting. But I think you can do better. His lust must be palpable. And the nymphs cannot be omniscient. Their weakness must be apparent. And you did make it plain that they compete. Please. More, Maestro.

Thanks, Y'all

Thank you all for the encouragement and feedback! I'll keep it in mind when editing future chapters--rest assured that Snatch has not lost yet.

I hope he wins! Maybe turns the tables or something.

Im going to preface this by saying that I'm deeply enjoying every word of this, but a word of warning, don't write exclusively for the mob, weigh their opinions and balance them with your own because you'll never please everyone. You are the author, you are god of this realm and don't let anyone tell you otherwise. Write what works and flows for you, because if you just write what you think the people want to read and not what naturally flows from you the magic fades and it ceases to be fun or any good and it just becomes work and laborious to both read and write. It's fantastic so far! I do hope you can continue it at such high caliber!

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Again, thanks, and don't worry about that--I've actually already written a couple chapters in advance. I'll be adjusting based on advice on prose, but plot-specific requests aren't going to have any effect in most cases (though I'll keep them in mind).

Fantastic stuff, it's hard to find stuff this good from an active user.

My only request is that you let the poor chap get off eventually

oooooh!

again OoooooH!