Wolf Eve

I almost gave up on this story. It was OK it got better in the end.

wow...

I really loved this story. the pacing was a bit off at the beginning but once the wolf showed up it evened out. 5/5

Started off a bit slow

then built up to quite a finish! At first, I didn't know where the story was going, but enjoyed how you built up Buchard's character. Although you didn't ignore Peter, you spent more time on Buchard and Eve, who are both interesting (in their own ways). And I liked the subplot about killing the previous priest and the explanation of why the chapel was empty. Nice that Eve went to the chapel instead of the town, where (I'm guessing) she would have been killed on the spot. You could write a sequel if you want (and I'd be interested in one) to see how Peter and Eve make out in the "other" world.