All Comments on 'Jingle Bell Rock Ch. 04'

hot writing, amazing sex scenes, lovely emotion and character development and more is what might just start to describe your work. but hey, why are you writing them shorter every time? okay i get it; it's your mean side getting to light, right?

Cool story but could you make the chapters a little longer? I am guessing the boy in the hospital is Jack's brother surely Brian would ask oppose to assuming.

Didnt see this coming.

Maybe it is his brother?

And yes please write longer chapters :)

I am really loving this story

awesome story,i enjoy the potrayal of feelings.....Its superb!!!!

awesome story,i enjoy the potrayal of feelings.....Its superb!!!!

awesome story,i enjoy the potrayal of feelings.....Its superb!!!!

awesome story,i enjoy the potrayal of feelings.....Its superb!!!!

awesome story,i enjoy the potrayal of feelings.....Its superb!!!!

I have loved him right from the beginning but now I'm annoyed! Good grief, way to jump to conclusions. But, um, I wait for Ch. 05 no less eagerly...

I'd be surprised if the person in there wasn't Jack's brother or relative in some form, considering Brian asked the nurse if there was someone named Coultier in here and she directed him to that room, meaning that's the patient's surname, just like Jack's