All Comments on 'Babydoll Ch. 14'

Don't make us wait so long for more. I check every day to see if you have put more of the story down. After all they and we have been through please give us a happy ending. I think this is the best story of all that is on the incest section so please make us happy.

I do have Chapter 15 most of the way completed. It will take hours to complete and then there is the proofread. I try to grab an hour here and there to move it forward. I am sorry it takes so long to get these out. I am as disappointed as you are, but unfortunately this is not the priority of life. Working, paying bills, and managing life is the priority.

I appreciate what you have said. Wish I had more kind comments. It helps light the fire to ensure that I get this done sooner rather than later. I also appreciate when people give me a good vote and encourage me that this is at least interesting in some form or fashion.

Again Thanks for the encouragement.

Can't wait for the next chapter! :) you've done some good work and have made one of the best series on this site.

This is a wonderful story with twists and turns and unreasonable hopes and dreams. I do not see a happy ending as it is very difficult to work out (as YOU, being the author, are working on). My version would do this, involve Jill in the love and the sexual aspects of the situation, let her grow to love Ash in a way that allows for the brother and sister love to continue and she loves them both and they love her. Jill seems to be too nice a person to just be fobbed off and out of the picture and she already loves Jimmy and like Ashley a lot, she just needs to learn the physical love with her along with everything else. The only other ending which would turn out halfway right is for Jimmy and Jill to marry and Ashley to find someone but the love between brother and sister would continue. That is not as satisfactory as the three way love I mentioned earlier. That is all I have to say now, I have really enjoyed reading this story, there has been a lot of sex, angst, romance in here, what else could you ask for? Lamar

I agree with Befree would like to see a happy ending for this couple. Since he is going into the law practice with his Grandfather would be pretty hard for this couple to hook up and marry but maybe a three way involving Jill it just might work just would love to see these two lovebirds be able to stay together forever. There are two many "normal" marriages don't last these two really seem to have an unconditional love !

I happened upon this story a few days ago and I can't stop reading it. I've been a lurker on this site before. I accidently found this story while searching the new stories tag function and I am so glad that I did. Had to comment on it. This is just an incredible story. Kudos on your amazing story.

In the beginning of the story Ashley was nervous because she wasn't on the pill but after that did she start taking it or just decide to throw caution into the wind? Also; what was it that she needed to tell Jimmy? Kudos again to a very well written and addictive story.

A wesome story series. I plan on finish reading today. On to 15 !!!

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