Friendsgiving Dinner

PROOF READ!!!!

Could have been MUCH better if only you had tidied it up!!

Not a good tradition to start

Sharing wives are for nincompoop WACC husbands

"It was a great site to see"

Was it a web site, or a sight? Need an editor.

Good start...

Would love to see some more. Agree with a few others that it needs a bit of spell/grammar checking beyond what Word or other programs can do...as one of the Anon's posted, "site" would not come up in any spellchecker, but a reviewer hopefully would catch it.

The good thing is you can edit your stories and upload them so it is replaced by the new one.

Great start for your first submission, hope to see it continue!

Would appreciate editing help

I know that errors can be annoying to read, but clearly I'm reading right over my own. If anyone would like to offer to edit I'd appreciate the help.
To the guy with guy with the negativity- to each his own.

You need more than editing help.

You need to learn how to write erotic stories, because this one sure isn't. 1*

Great Story

Fuck the naysayers. Great hot story. Thank you.

Friendsgiving :) I liked it :)

Lots of holes plugged...without drama

The trouble with a story about a hotwife, especially one who has 'partied' with the host previously, is that there is ZERO uncertainty. She IS going to put out for the host again tonight! Hubby is expecting it and, although a swinger more than a wimp, he will be delighted! If there is ANY question, it is WHY they are no longer maintaining the prior frequency!

I am happy for all three who were pleased, but I was NOT titillated because it was SO predictable!

re: Great Story

No. fuck assholes who can't stand it when others dare to have a different opinion.

great story

Good hot story. Keep it up!

Fragmented

Not my cup of tea