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Great Story
I like the pacing of the story, it was very well structured and gave just the right amount of background but stayed to the point. This is inspiring for my stories, I think you have something beautiful going on.
Great story! Could even be true! Keep Writing More
I think the way the story took off right from the start and without a lot of unnecessary dialogue, we got the plot, the beautiful lady and the what I believe to be a bit on the rough looking side male, this time he was the printer repairman and could have as easily been the custodian. Very hot erotic story, almost exactly as things like this happen, 5 stars-please write some more, obvious talent and quality with words.
A Pleasure To Read
Thoroughly enjoyed this. A real gem of a story.
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