Paul Solves a Problem

What a great first start!

I really liked the pace of your first ever story! Keep going especially with the anal fucking ;)

If the character is a virgin, who told him he looks good naked then?

word usage

Not bad for a first effort, but the proper name for the finger next to your thumb is Index finger.

An OK story

The use of first person, present tense may annoy some readers but it worked well enough here. If you continue this story keep it the same.

A really nice start - please continue!

that's a pretty hot story.......

...and a good start.
You do need to put some more effort into proof reading and editing.
Maybe get some other eyes on, before you submit.
Issues with the difference in meaning between:
Then and than,
They're, their and there
Spelling 'piling' as 'pilling' was pretty obvious.
Finally, you don't 'relish in the taste', rather you simply 'relish the taste'.

Some annoying for how obvious and/or careless they are, others, just demonstrating a need for proofing and editing.
But make no mistake, we all want to be Paul this afternoon!

Please continue.