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crap
Crap says it all as the style and frequent use of "--" makes for difficult reading and confusion.
good, hardcore fucking
Don't know what the problem is: your grammar & punctuation are above average, the style is concise & clear. I'm heartily sick of wading through lines of pointless description & florid, unnecessary dialogue. Keep up the good work!
DVD
Worked for me. Wish I had a copy of that DVD.
Five cocks
Loved it when Tracey took five cocks - wish mine was one of them. Would love to ass fuck some Asian chick while she was taking multiple cocks in every other hole.
Thanks for the feedback
Thanks for the comments, guys and gals. To whoever reads this story I would be very grateful if you would comment. I look forward to constructive feedback.
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