All Comments on 'Conscience'

by demure101

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greenmountaineergreenmountaineerover 10 years ago

Very imaginative. Loved it! "your fair share off the block, a chip" suggested to me an exaggerated sense of entitlement and anger at not getting whatever it was, all in the same line.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 10 years ago
been there

want the t-shirt?

congrats, something different

again same question why are your comments so anemic?

surely if you can put this into verse...

ah, never mind

5ed

tazz317tazz317over 10 years ago
CAN WILL POWER BY ITSELF

ever overcome conscience and behavior. TK U MLJ LV NV

Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years ago
Really liked the form

you used - different, so very concise and clear - my comments would be an echo of the greenmountainer's.

TsothaTsothaover 10 years ago

I like the format and the message in your poem. Although I cannot possibly know the full meaning behind your words, I'd leave a counter-thought: sometimes power is just a way to defend oneself. Who can say what the "fair share of the block" is? We're taught that we get what we deserve, but the truth is that you seldom get things done just by waiting for others to remember you.

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