by demure101
Very imaginative. Loved it! "your fair share off the block, a chip" suggested to me an exaggerated sense of entitlement and anger at not getting whatever it was, all in the same line.
want the t-shirt?
congrats, something different
again same question why are your comments so anemic?
surely if you can put this into verse...
ah, never mind
5ed
ever overcome conscience and behavior. TK U MLJ LV NV
you used - different, so very concise and clear - my comments would be an echo of the greenmountainer's.
I like the format and the message in your poem. Although I cannot possibly know the full meaning behind your words, I'd leave a counter-thought: sometimes power is just a way to defend oneself. Who can say what the "fair share of the block" is? We're taught that we get what we deserve, but the truth is that you seldom get things done just by waiting for others to remember you.