i totally agree this could be the beginning of some great adventures between the vampirress and her kitty. i'm very intrigued and hope you continue this story
Innovative world you've created here. Lovely phrasing, simple & emotive.Your word choices are precise. Dialogue between characters add to the uniqueness of each, & you've made them believable, so much so that I can easily visualize them.
This was a surprising accidental discovery & the best part of it is I can read more of your stories.
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That was fun.
Nice first story. A good start for a longer story, I hope. The creature angle is different for this category. Your companion art is nice, also.
Welcome aboard.
i totally agree this could be the beginning of some great adventures between the vampirress and her kitty. i'm very intrigued and hope you continue this story
Very good story... would love to see it develop into a series. *grins* Keep up the excellent writing.
Where have you been all my life?
Innovative world you've created here. Lovely phrasing, simple & emotive.Your word choices are precise. Dialogue between characters add to the uniqueness of each, & you've made them believable, so much so that I can easily visualize them.
This was a surprising accidental discovery & the best part of it is I can read more of your stories.
Really well done. I'm delightfully captivated.
XOXO,
Taylor
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