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by monabologna01/02/14

Good start

It seemed a little rushed in places and the ending was waaayy abrupt. The spelling issues made it difficult to follow sometimes. The premise was really hot though! I suggest getting an editor to help clean it up a bit and finish it. I wanna know what happens!!!
Good luck

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by Anonymous01/02/14

While I gave you 4 stars, I think there was a lot missing. I hope there is more to come because if that was the end, it may well be the worst ending ever.

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