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Every Tale Gets Better
Another fine piece of brief storytelling! Each story improves over the last and is more enjoyable. I look forward to a compilation from you in ebook form. Just start with the first one and continue through! Exceptionally written.
The fatal moment
Why was it fatal? She didn't die, and neither did he. Or did you mean fateful???
Fatal - Of decisive importance; fateful: came through at the fatal moment.
Word have many meanings, depending on how they're used.
i liked it
good story. a little preposterous but I love stories where a stranger fucks an unsuspecting cunt. well done.
gross
Seriously. Gross. I hope he used a condom. Yuck.
Clever idea!
This was the most inventive scenario I've read in a while, and the anonymity of the guy's coming, taking, and departure was an added bonus to the story....high marks!
Just nasty
And complete drivel.
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