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The Elevator

byAshson©
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by Anonymous

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by koinonia_9201/01/14

Every Tale Gets Better

Another fine piece of brief storytelling! Each story improves over the last and is more enjoyable. I look forward to a compilation from you in ebook form. Just start with the first one and continue through! Exceptionally written.

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by SusieJ01/01/14

The fatal moment

Why was it fatal? She didn't die, and neither did he. Or did you mean fateful???

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by Anonymous01/01/14

Fatal - Of decisive importance; fateful: came through at the fatal moment.

Word have many meanings, depending on how they're used.

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by peebudy01/01/14

i liked it

good story. a little preposterous but I love stories where a stranger fucks an unsuspecting cunt. well done.

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by Anonymous01/03/14

gross

Seriously. Gross. I hope he used a condom. Yuck.

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by olsalty01/05/14

Clever idea!

This was the most inventive scenario I've read in a while, and the anonymity of the guy's coming, taking, and departure was an added bonus to the story....high marks!

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by Anonymous01/06/14

Just nasty

And complete drivel.

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