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Quite amusing with a humorous end.
Well done
TOO FLAKY
The story began veering from an interesting read when other couples began showing up.
3 Star
What a rip off
That was taken and expanded from a TV ad. Sheesh And I didn't like the ad so you can guess what the rating was here.
Huh
The story veered from being an interesting read when the other couples showed up? That was line two. How vested could you have possibly been? Dear god it's not a plot change at line two it's the plot.
Big pile of junk.
Too many people in the pot ruined it.
????
Hard to suspend belief on this one. At first blush the action seems unlikely, but considering things today it might happen. Anyway it "ain't" a bad read.
Hay this is fiction if I recall
This was a fun read.
I never saw this coming...
...when I watched the Carlton beer commercials!
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