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by Anonymous

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by Tigerladyandhim01/02/14

Quite amusing with a humorous end.
Well done

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by Anonymous01/02/14

TOO FLAKY

The story began veering from an interesting read when other couples began showing up.

3 Star

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by Anonymous01/02/14

What a rip off

That was taken and expanded from a TV ad. Sheesh And I didn't like the ad so you can guess what the rating was here.

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by Anonymous01/02/14

Huh

The story veered from being an interesting read when the other couples showed up? That was line two. How vested could you have possibly been? Dear god it's not a plot change at line two it's the plot.

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by Anonymous01/02/14

Big pile of junk.

Too many people in the pot ruined it.

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????

Hard to suspend belief on this one. At first blush the action seems unlikely, but considering things today it might happen. Anyway it "ain't" a bad read.

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by Ducky701/03/14

Hay this is fiction if I recall

This was a fun read.

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by Anonymous01/09/14

I never saw this coming...

...when I watched the Carlton beer commercials!

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