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Who is Peeing Everywhere?

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/05/14

Keep it going!

Love the story! Keep up the work! Just add a bit more detail, make the story longer, and add more description of how the girls look, the location of the puddles and the actions, ect. You have the storyline , just needs fine tubing! Great job

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by Codlingsby11/17/14

Liked it!

Good, believable story and very nicely written. And a turn on too!

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by goldengob05/29/15

Very nice story.

Very nice, as previous comment, could do with a bit more detail, but very well, and conscientiously written. Thank you.

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by Adrian6970200607/22/16

Good story

Good story, Steve.

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