All Comments on 'Week 1, Trip 1'

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LunarokiLunarokiover 14 years ago
Very nice, but...

I liked this chapter a lot. It was neat watching Jill get comfortable being naked in a more-or-less public place. One thing that I noticed though, at the end of the previous chapter Dr. Green told them to meet on Sunday morning, while in this chapter they are all meeting on Saturday morning. Other than that it was an enjoyable story. Can't wait to catch up on the rest of them. :)

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