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by Anonymous

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by shiann01/03/14

sex in public

have been in strip clubs but none like that that was hot hot hot

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by Anonymous01/03/14

Well, no.

Nice concept, but very disjointed. It wasn't clear to me how or if they got on stage, or just fucked in the crowd. nobody showed any emotion, and every sentence it seemed had a personal pronoun.

Not for me

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by clarkroberts02/07/14

Good but too short

A good read, but a a bit short. It would have been better with a little character development. Maybe, explore how watching makes the watcher feel.

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