Very erotic picture you have painted. Interested to see where this goes.
... and thank you for writing such a fascinating first chapter. I look forward very much to seeing where this one goes - well done and please have five stars for this one!
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Great Start
Very erotic picture you have painted. Interested to see where this goes.
Welcome, new author ...
... and thank you for writing such a fascinating first chapter. I look forward very much to seeing where this one goes - well done and please have five stars for this one!
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Window Onto Pleasure Ch. 01 or
More submissions by Big Jay.