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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/07/14

learn genders

You are writing erotica and you can't keep genders correct!? So sad.

I will let you find your mistake.

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by Anonymous01/08/14

learn genders

I was going to tell you the mistake, but yes, it's better if you figure it out for yourself. Hints: lots of massage stories have the same mistake. And it's near the beginning of the story.
Fix it and repost. There are instructions on this site telling you how to make corrections.

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by Anonymous01/08/14

masseur = male massage professional

masseuse = female massage professional

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by Bert_Fegg01/09/14

Good story, I liked the humorous twist at the end, and I liked the way you told the story. I give great massage, but it turns out I can't write it as well - I shall definitely be using this for reference.

Shame God had to kill that kitten for the Masseuse/Masseur mix up - Just as a matter of interest - did this story start off with a girl giving the massage?

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by maverick32301/10/14

Hi Bert_Fegg. No, it was always a man, just a simple mix-up. I am resubmitting tonight to straighten it out. Glad you liked it, more stories on the way when I get time.

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