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Vacation From Hell Ch. 01

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by Anonymous05/14/07

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why tell the ending before you "start at the first". a lot of anticipation and buildup of interest was negated by reading the first few paragraphs. why is that so hard for writers to understand? well, i sure wish i hadn't already read those first few paragraphs.

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by Anonymous04/04/09

rEVIEW

What a total brain dead Wimp story. absolutely nothing original - and just like a thousand others on this wimp author laden forum

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by tazz31710/20/11

SO FAR SO GOOD

maybe the fishing will surprise. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Drbeamer333303/05/13

Loved it

A great beginning. I smell trouble.

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