All Comments on 'The Virgin's Bag'

Load of bull shit

" she got on her knees on the floor and proceeded to lavish on his shaft..." She proceeded to lavish WHAT on his shaft? "Pecks" are what birds do. It's "pecs". "...make sure you have not fell down the drain." "FALLEN" down the drain. "She turned to him, keeping her ass in his face, she grabbed his head saying..." Her ass is in his face while she grabs his head? She must be amazingly flexible. "...fully filling her up and emptying her of himself." That makes no sense. You've mixed up tenses too. Get an editor. God.