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Fool around again, please.
WOW another sexy story ... very nice
Good enough as a short story.
We know nothing about either of the characters. Write some more please. You could expand the story.
Thanks!
Thanks both of you for your comments!
1BrownEyedGuy, it means a lot that you've commented on more than one story and I appreciate your support. It makes me want to write more! :)
And Mitch, I appreciate your feedback a lot. This is the third story with this narrator and they all give slightly more information, so if you're interested in her you can read a bit more. However, I'm not very experienced with the first person and I find narration and dialogue really wobbly (???). So, I'll do my best to get better. Thanks for your help! :)
Really just a number?
Is there any old that is too old for your narrator. . .or you?
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