Bowled Over By Sis Ch. 01

Go for it - write some more

It's a fun story - I think some continuation would be great.

Simple answer...

Yesssssss!!!

Yes!

Great story. Yes, continue it. Thanks.

More Please!

Great story well told with loads of potential. Keep up the good work!

Keep the story going

I was on the edge of my seat the whole story I just wanted to be your brother I would fucked you right away though I think you sounded so hot

More, please

Too many unresolved plot lines to just stop...

Hell yeh,

Are there any more rewards or forfeits?

should it continue?

HELL YES!!!!!!!

DAMN RIGHT !!!!!!!!!!

If you don't continue, I think there just might be a lynch mob out after you : > )

second helping

Well done, this desert dweller is impressed. No women of impossible proportions, No spoilers of disbelief, even if that many 300's in a row hasn't been seen by anyone shy of Roth I'll say motivation spurred his accuracy on. I would like nothing more than to continue reading this tempting tail. If you have no more, then thanks for the read

You just can't roll a gutter ball now

Please continue it is a refreshing idea that can be further explored.

ProfQ

Hurry up

Hope you make it home

Excellent

Damn good story line and very good use of grammar.

YOU have to continue, the story needs ( as well as the readers ) a good chapter 11 and so on.

Thanks

Len

Bowled Oover Over By Sis

YES!!!!!!!!!!!

I just bowled a 300. Where's my blowjob?

Amazing plot and storyline. Can't wait to see where you take it from here.

SHOULD YOU CONTINUE?!!!

Silly boy, of course you should. Hell, how many women are on that league ? He needs to fuck all of them. Any chance He'll knock up his sister? Just a thought. Thanks for one of the best stories on this site in a long time, and for reminding me of what a talented writer you are. I'll have to re-read your other stories until your next installment . Need I say 5 stars? Great job!

max052

SHOULD I CONTINUE?

If you don't, maybe I'll be a member of that lynch mob!

It's time to fuck sister with maybe with an audience of one or two of the really hot females. And then tell them you are brother & sister! Maybe we'll have a circle fuck. Brother & Sis should get closer, fall in love and marry.

HC

A Perfect Strike!

Your plot is orginal and fun. Love the development so far and yes, keep writing. There is massive potential in this story, both between Jason and his sister and the other players in the league. I can imagine some interesting scenarios. What would happen if Jason bowled four straight perfect games. Do all the women blow him. And what about the semi-finales and finales. Does the losing team submit to the winners right there and then, with everyone on the losing team going down on the winning team. Any on bi-curious out there. And what kind of prize do the winner's get. King's and Queen's of the League Orgy. And finally, what about top scorer. If you keep Jason getting 300 pt games, he'll certainly become the top scorer. Does every woman on the league have to go down on him or does he get to put his 'ten pin' into each of their 'pits'. Oh the fun you can have with this.

i loved your story

I hope that you keep it just them,but it's your story.i love a love story,but it looks like it may go the way of the orgy.i hope not...5*****

yes! keep it going!

Excellent story, please keep writting and if psiible get a lot of anal in there!

Yes CONTINUE

Just a thought... What happens if one of the ladies rolls a 300 game???

Promising build up

Good start with teasing plot, hope you will keep up this series. Well done.

Great Strokes

Great stuff, you have to continue with this story, can't wait for the next installment!!!

good so far

IF you continue ( and face it we all know you have a bad habit of either screwing up at the end or FAILING to finish ) keep it to just the two of them, no threesomes or orgies just the two siblins PERIOD.

please more

you have to write more of this story i know its going to be awesome.you are my favorite author on here,i like how ur not afraid to have the guy have a big cock to me its watching porn (you dont watch porn with ugly women you want them hot as hell so why not have the guy hung) anyway please continue i love all your stuff.oh would love another chapter to motherfuckinghell.

wowser

great read

It better

Great start, now will he return the favour?

Yes please continue !! You've got us all worked up now !

I think Jen has some big things to take care of and so does Heather........

Thank you and please write a few more chapters.................

Great story

Very creative and fun story

Don't bother with another chapter, we know what's next

You and I both know it will be another of your "I've been starved for sex for ages so I managed to cum in my sister and her friends 97 times in one night" cock-operas; don't waste our time.

what happens if a woman throws a 300?now that the ice is broken they should have no problem with the public side of things so they can service each other.since she has a different last name they could even get married.leading to the family they couldnt have with the exs that didnt measure up to the true loves the found in each other.

liked it

Hey not bad definitely want to see how this plays out an what happens if a woman gets 300

Naked games?

Close the alley but for the leagues and start a new point system. 200 for bj, 250 for a nude dryhump, 300 for a threeway. If a whole team breaks 200 they have a full league orgy.

Very creative

A creative and new twist to an old theme. I loved your originality.

BTW, please ignore Anonymouse, who doesn't even have the balls to let you know who "it" is. Any fool can throw mud, especially those who can't write. If "it" dislikes your writing so much, why did "it" bother reading?

JC

Of course you should continue.

Of course you should continue. Jenny needs a reward for introducing him to such a fun league. She also needs a reward for being such a sweet and hot little sister.
Please don't let us down -- finish this up right!

Yes

But keep it within a sense of believable reality. Its a fun read up to this point. Maybe even have a special nude challenge game. (Why not? Don't nudists bowl too?)

Never disappointed

When I saw you wrote a new story I knew it would be a good one. What I didn't expect is for it to be a great story. Please continue.

great

loved it so much I read it twice :) can't wait for next chapter

Awesome 300 Blow.

As a bowler in a league I would absolutely love to bowl in a league like that one. The story was wonderfully written and I think it is essential that you write several chapters in continuation of the theme. Great keep it up!

Great story

Would love to bowl in a league like this. It definitely needs to be continued. Great Read!

Intriguing

Now that you have my attention, you've got to continue this story. It's so different that I need to see where it goes.

ONE...HOT...STORY!

Loved your ribald yarn...what a sensual tale...waiting for ch. 02!!!!!!

Should you continue? Hell, yes!

What an original premise. And well written as always. Asking if it should continue is like asking if the sun should rise in the east in the morning. Yes, yes, yes!!!

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you'd better continue

Fun leaguge

By all means please continue with the story line.

It should get quite interesting in; the next release.

OMG!!

It is a MUST that you have to continue. Got my interest. Well laid out storyline and to leave it open...........
Ch. 02 please.

yes

yes please do

Oh yeah...continue

Keep pumping it...great story

Super

Of definitely, you must continue!