It Was Only a Blowjob Ch. 04

What a hypocrite. John need to get over himself. Yes his stupid wife screwed up, he forgave her and I thought moved on. So he is forcing Alice to give him a handjob which he doesn't consider a betrayal to Wendy? I guess making his point with the teenage hooker wasn't enough. I wonder if he would be all happy if Wendy gave some guy a handjob. John did say he wasn't betraying her since Alice didn't use her mouth but she eventually did. He is going to guilt her into letting the hand/blowjob be OK. Like a dummy Wendy is going to let it go.

well written as always TTT

Ariesgirl

I don't see him so much as a hypocrite, but more "an eye for an eye type". While he has forgiven Wendy for the blowjobs, she has lied to him by omission for not mentioning what she did with the handyman and wasnt drunk then unlike the blowjob situation.

That omission from her confession about her cheating, when he asked her what she had done has to have damaged his already fragile trust in her. And let's be honest here, Wendy was the one who fucked up bigtime, so she has to deal with the shit to make it right.

starting to drag enough blowjobs and lets get the revenge going

Ok its getting to goofy . mom hooker wife sister in law really your wife would put up with this.to much repeat lets get going. Your a great writer what's up with dragging on and on. Gave you a 2 for repeat and dragging on I thought this stories was done with Ch.3 I was happy to see Ch.4 then just a repeat of the first with one paragraph new .Come on TX Tall show us your good stuff we know your got it in you .Teach these people a lesson they wont forget.

not a hypocrite

he is just showing his wife what happens when she lies to him. if she had told him about the handjob then he probably wouldn't have done anything about it because he was focused on the bjs.

Don't See It

Blackmail is never "right"...so Alice was a bitch, and yes Windy wasn't completely honest as she didn't mention the handjob....but forcing sex with Alice is not the answer to their problems....let's be honest...this is just another nail in the coffin of their marriage, how can blackmail, forced sex with Alice, and NOT addressing the real problem his wife's continued deceit help to rebuild the marriage...as much as I like you as an author, that is pretty much a hold of you know what...glad I got my boots on.

Alice worked hard to persuade her little sister that cheating was ok, watched her break her marriage vows and continued the pretense when Wendy's marriage went down the tubes so fuck her. Anyone who sticks their nose into another couples relationship to cause damage deserves EVERYTHING they have coming to them.

Alice, Tom, Miguel and the other two blowjob bozo's need to feel hubby's pain.

trust

Once it is gone is hard to get back. I can see where he would be more upset about the handjob than the blowjobs because he was at a point where he was starting to trust her agian. This is why cheating at any level tends to destory a marriage. it isnt just about x amount or typws of sex acts. it is all about the lies told to cover for those sex acts. I dont rhinkhe can drive home the message to her just by doing an eye for an eye with sex.great story waiting to see where it goes.

GOING SLOWLY!!!!

Can't wait for your next chapter! Please make more of effort for Johnto have more of a Meanstreak! & when will he be giving the Payback Revenge? this story is taking long ?? Thanks

When

In which chapter do we find out a) that she's been getting fucked on the side too and b) that the baby is some other guy's

2*s

Sometimes a story gets away from the writer . Or maybe you want to incude
everything and the kitchen sink.
Now just marking time til the last chapter. Hey maybe TTT will finish with
a family and friends orgy ! I know he came close before.

AMerryMan

Long Story

Since it's in Novels and Novellas, I figured from the start it was going to be a long one. Enjoying the detail, explanations and back story. Don't let the whiners slow you down. Still waiting for Kelly's story.

I like this series, and i've been more than happy to highly rate the previous chapters, but I'm afraid i've had to downgrade this one. It seems like this one is getting away from you a bit. This is an ambitious story, and its different from much of the fare here, and even some of your own previous works in that it is not a stroke story. Sure, there are lots of sex scenes and blowjobs galore, but its meant to be a fully fledged story, not just a bunch of fucking. Until this chapter, I think you've served that concept quite well. Your characters are formed and unique, with their own motivations and lives. You have put them in situation that, while somewhat far fetched, isn't corny, absurd, or cliche. Your dialogue is crisp, and your attention to detail is excellent.

But in this chapter, i feel like you go off the rails, particularly in the scenes with the mother-in-law and to a lesser extent, with the sister-in-law. Unless this story is going to take a sharp turn in both content and concept, the MIL's sexual involvement with the trio is gratuitous. It doesn't advance the plot in any way, and while it might be an interesting diversion for the characters, it doesn't tell us anything about them we need to know. It felt like it was in there just for shock value. In a stroke story, that's fine. In fact, the more, the merrier. But this is a bigger work than that and deserves more consideration.

As for the closing scene, I understand what you are trying to do, and in context, it makes a certain amount of sense. But it stretches the limits of what could be considered a credible situation. Now, you may open the 5th chapter with a sharp deviation and prove me very wrong, but as it stands right now, i finished the chapter not with a "that was awesome!" but with a "really? reeeaaaallly?"

25

25

It just got real stupid.

Too bad, you don't seem to know when to stop.

On the Contrary

You should not stop. Great series. Thank you. You have created such an interesting, believable set of characters that I really hope you have at least two more stories in you in the series: one to finish the Alice/Miguel connection and one to explore Kelly's background, whicht you have mysteriously alluded to. You even implied that Kelly and John may do it, and maybe Kelly and Wendy will evolved into more les sessions.

My only quibble is that you have avoided the STD issue with Kelly, the former hooker. I suppose I am OK with no STDs with the 3 BJ men as they are all family men and apparently monogamous

Who the hell is Jim?

"I...I didn't know, Jim. I'm sorry. How could I know? Nobody's talking to me."

I thought his name was John?

I almost expected him to tell her to drop trou and bend over when she asked how she could make it up to him. But then how does she explain that to her husband?

On teh other hand, since Mom, Wendy and Kelly are coming through the door . . .

Sorry

I meant to say


I almost expected him to tell her to drop trou and bend over for a spanking

(time for bed, now )

OK...

...you really need to continue this series. Leaving us hanging where you did was cruel...lol C'mon man, end this series right...

Where's the rest of the story I'm getting impatient

I find this chapter disturbing in many ways.

1 & 2 were really good, 3 was a 'wtf' with the too quick change in the characters and now this .. . did you have to go borderline incest? This story is going downhill fast.

What about Dan?

Does John not understand that he's betraying his family here? This makes him no better than Tom or Miguel.

The REAL Hypocrites

The real hypocrites are reading revenge porn on a porn story website criticizing a fictional character for being a hypocrite while jerking off to it.

Waiting for more

I found this humorous. It was fun reading, unreal, but fun, isn't that what fiction is?? Give them an inch and see what type of yarn they can spin?

That being said, what does he do about handjobs???

My opinion, He should have a sit down with Alice, Wendy and Kelly. Let Wendy know He now knows about the handjob. That the handjob was before they were married. while they were engaged. (I don't see a problem there)Only that it was the start of "it's not cheating". The "gang-bang" with the coworkers was after they were married and had a child. Somewhere, Alices's husband is going to have to know. Can't hide that the Parents have "tossed" her out. Dan will find out because the best of secrets get revealed eventually. People talk. If John wants Wendy to watch Alice give him a handjob, he'd better get that permission from Wendy first.

More, please!

I've been checking every day to see if you've posted the next chapter. PLEASE?? I hope these negative comments aren't discouraging you from posting another installment! I think your story is exciting, erotic and fresh. I'm frantic to see what happens next!!!

WTF?

Misty to Marie. Dave to Dan to Dave to Dan again. Then John to Jim to John. Confused enough? The names are like playing cards, shuffling around. WTF?

Not sure some of these...

... people making comments read the same story. The handjob WAS when they were married. It's an unusual tactic, but it seems the only way Wendy understands something is wrong is to have it thrown in her face. The reason he's making sure she sees it is because she apparently tried to hide it, although I suppose the way Alice had warped her mindset about cheating it's a little plausible that she actually did forget about it because it was inconsequential to her. I'm also looking forward to the continuation of this story and I'm a little puzzled. In his opening the author said all but the last chapter were done and edited but we've paused at 4 of 7 promised chapters. Normally this wouldn't even be worth mentioning, but this author always seems to come through with what he sets out to do. Again, I normally wouldn't even bring it up, but the pause has now lasted longer than it took to get the first 4 chapters out, so it seems worth mentioning.

another twist, hows she going to talk her way out of this one.

Is the remainder...

... coming soon?

And now the mother in law? Holy shit! And with the baby right there. Sick. The guy I feel bad for is Dan. This guys forces Alice to cheat on her hubby again. What a hypocrite.

Are you fucking kidding me?

This was THREE PAGES.

As soon as the Mother in Law got into the bed and naked, you pretty much lost me.

Three pages. Probably about 2,000 words.

What did we get out of this?

He considers doing something more to his friends.

He talks to Marie (or is it Misty this chapter? No, it was Misty in the first chapter) and spins her a tale.

He has a brief meeting with the Sister in Law.

Where did the other 1,500 words go? "I love you SO Much!" "Rub me harder!"

You take the STORY elements and condense them into "I updated her on what I said" but can't abbreviate the same damned sex?

You REALLY lost me at the Mother in Law. Why? I don't believe them as human beings anymore. Now they are mere fantasy chess pieces, and hence I don't care about them anymore.

Great story, totally hooked, but...

IS Tom married to MISTY or MARIE??? if in doubt please go read your own story! So many little things get over looked in hast or neglect. Please Keep Writing, just be accurate.

Starting to lose cohesiveness

I wish I had gotten this comment in in time. Husband is giving way too much control of the situation back to his wife. That might be the reason for what she did. I still don't believe that she didn't know that blow jobs were sex. I think she was miffed at hubby and since he gives in to her on everything that she just did it and figured he would be hurt a little and then forgive her, which is what he seems to be doing. Make him do penance for not doing what she wanted, sex wise. Also, he took Kelly in and paid for everything, but now she is taking Wendy's side and pressuring him. He had every right to be upset at her going to a hotel, stripping to her underwear and then tricking the guys into paying her. She obviously touched Tom right back in the same old place. If touching his cock and balls was wrong when she blew him, it was wrong when she tried to extract her revenge. And yeah, the MIL went from perpetually pissed at him to getting naked with him? Hard to believe, even though this is a fantasy story. I guess it reads so much like a first line novel that when TTT tries to put in the sex we are all waiting for, it seems far fetched.

Very good story, very well written, editing is much harder than it looks, so no complaints on that.

Whats next

The father in law joining them in their 150 acre bed? How about that circus that passed through town? Plenty of room in the bed for 30 clowns and a few acrobats!
This story lost any and all semblance of reality in the first chapter. Hell, it isn't even satire. Is there a Lit category called "Ridiculous Meandering Crap"?
I don't know how I managed to read this far, ( One too many beers, I guess), but this is where I step off the Asylum Bus!

lost me

Lost me once it went beyond Kelly. Not saying that the story sucked just that it was no longer my cup of tea. For a story that started out as anti cheating to go to being full of cheating just blew the story for me. Sorry, that's just the way it is.

Misty/Marie

Tom’s explanation to Marie/Misty was perfect, explained his questions without giving away the actual facts.

Wendy Since They Met

I don't think John needs to concern himself about what Wendy did since they MET, but there as probably a span of time before their engagement when they were exclusive. Did anything happen then?

@ariesgirl

The hand job, which he intends for Wendy to see, is because she never admitted the hand job she gave Miguel.

His intent is to make it clear to Wendy that she HAS to come clean on EVERYTHING, not just try to explain away the things she gets caught at.

@joln321

The hand job was NOT before they were married!

Good you got that asshole anony all pissed off and yelling at you

that means a 5 and that this story is good. When he/she/it yells IT is really up set. Good maybe his heart will stop!!!

I went back and forth on this chapter

Congrats. Great writing. Really great. Four out of five. I was all over the place trying to score this chapter. The mother-in-law stuff does nothing for me. if this story was called I Did my Wife, my Mistress and my Mother-in-Law, I wouldn't even click on in. It's just not my thing. But your strong writing brought me through relatively unscathed. The ending with the sister-in-law is clever and interesting. I really liked her explanation about why she told her sister what she did. I also like his punishment. I can't wait for the next chapter. Cheers Steve

Jeez

Now it's just getting fucking weird. At least now we know the sister's tale. One more chapter...

Interesting at the beginnning, but . . .

It was an interesting situation at the beginning, but has been going downhill since then. I know that this is a site for stories relating to sex, but in the best written stories, the description of the sex acts is almost secondary to the plot. And there just seems to be too much of it. Also, throwing the mother-in-law into the picture was just plain "jumping the shark." You lost me there. I love Kelly, though. She adds a bit of humor to the story.

Really good

I think the story is great. It's way more interesting than just the pure sex stories. Ignore the comments from some of the others. It's really an interesting story.

I guess I enjoy it even more because I'm about to get divorced. So, I get a kick out of the main character and his point of view and his actions.

Chapter 5?

I really enjoyed the story, but chapter 5 turned out to be an earlier chapter repeated. I have now read all of your stories except for a few and enjoyed them thoroughly almost without reservation. Thank you for your hard work.

More Secrets?

Only now John finds out about Wendy giving a handjob to Miguel. Was that the one and only time with Miguel? I doubt it. Wendy and her sister Alice have a history of lying and cheating. And omitting truths. Sounds like cheating on John before he put a ring on her finger was 'not cheating' also. And how did Tom know the exact same words Alice had used to make giving other men blowjobs not an example of cheating.I expect Wendy to do more cheating over the holiday party season.