Sex in Front of Our Good Friend

Voyeur

Cheap thrills

Lucky guy

wish my wife would do that. Icame just reading it .you should give your friend a cocksucking next time

Very good story

Realistic story. Many fun things happen in hot tubs

It was too short and missed the dialogs.

Thank you, SandyM

Neither SandyM nor I like a story (as much) when it is purely narrated. This one may be better than many because most of the action COULD have (and some clearly DID) transpire without any conversation! But it took, for me, a 4* contender into 3star very decisively!

3* Let your readers HEAR (some of) what's happening.

I SECOND THAT

I agree with Sandy M. It also seems cruel to tease the poor guy like that. At least give him sloppy seconds.