All Comments on 'Eva and Friends'

by tomlitilia

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Outstanding way of creating a sex-positive version of a story that so often just sounds trashy. Nice job! Looking forward to the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
GREAT!!!

WOW. This is great! Why don't you have more stories posted here???

tomlitiliatomlitiliaabout 10 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the encouraging comments, both here and in private. I've sent off part 2 for editing so it will appear soon I hope

BriteaseBriteaseabout 10 years ago
Wow

I don't think I've ever enjoyed reading a sex scene so much. I'm a fan!

tomlitiliatomlitiliaabout 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

As this was my first attempt at writing, I appreciate the positive feedback. Second part will be out soon

RaySunRaySunalmost 10 years ago
Fucking Incredibly Amazing!

FUCK! This is incredibly amazing!

I've read many stories here on Literotica among the different topics / themes. However, I think this is the first time I've read one that was sooo totally, absolutely about Facials, which is definitely one of my fetishes. And with it being done so scorchingly well done ... Day-Um! This was definitely one of my all time favorites.

As I alluded to, I read many stories on here on Literotica, but it is only the absolute Volcanically HOT ones that I bookmark to have around forever for reading again and again. And this story I definitely bookmarked.

Great job, Tomlitilia! I definitely enjoyed this one.

I am off to go check out Chapter 02.

masterandmargaritamasterandmargaritaabout 9 years ago
Great story

Loved everything about the way this was written: the facial-loving leading lady, the respectful gentlemen, the camera exhibition at the end. Looking forward to the rest!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Chuck says

It was excellent. Very imageitive. Can't wait 2 read part 2 and the other parts.

Tks and keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Hot Story

What is special about this story is that Eva actually gets off on having cum landing on her face. My wife has always been very oral. There was a time when every session was me kneeling over her face feeding her my cock as we both masturbated her. We soon realized that if she came 1st it ruined it for both of us (because it is all about her 'need'). It was easy to get her close because it turns her on so much and to this day she always ends up begging for my cum (so she can cum) and there is absolutely NOTHING hotter (for a man) than seeing his cum actually trigger a violent orgasm in a woman just from landing on her skin- just amazing!! We see so many facials in porn where the woman is just posing for or worse tolerating cum shot on her. If she's not into it then it is a complete turn off for me. But you nailed it here

DexMandrakeDexMandrakealmost 7 years ago
A Masterpiece of Literary Erotica!

I absolutely LOVE this story! Dialogue really takes me over the top, and this was perhaps the best dialogue I have ever read on Literotica! Characters were friendly, kind, and adventurous! This story was willing to address the topic of reconciling feminism with erotica (two subjects I care deeply about). Very well done! Bravo ... and ENCORE! :: cheering :: ~ Dex

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Queen and Whore

This is the one of the few stories I've read in the site so far that pictures a "Queen and Whore" fantasy, and I find your writing amazingly erotic all around !

hdwg2003hdwg2003almost 4 years ago
sluts

Gotta love um!

pastaman47pastaman47almost 3 years ago

Great friends, Great story.

architya2000architya20003 months ago

An wonderful idea.

Great writing.

Thanks for this

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

So very fucking hot, sex positive, woman positive.

Brava!

BigbaaaadwolfBigbaaaadwolfabout 2 months ago

Loved it, a sweet woman letting her inner sluttiness (I say slut or sluttiness in admiration), especially in front of friends - people she's known a long time. I'm still hard after reading it and wish I had friends like her.

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