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good to see you back
rhythm, pacing and rhyme are really well done, a lot of really good lines in this that portray the thoughts of those moments,
the first stanza is rocking and sets the tone and pace
thoroughly enjoyed this
It felt like dance. Nicely done.
A Wonderful Song of the Heart
Beautiful words that "Answer some questions we were never meant to ask"
Thanks for setting a lovely tune in my heart for the rest of my day.
Doc
BEYOND BEAUTIFUL
What an TALENTED poet. I do not usually read poetry, unless i need to express myself when i am unable to do so verbally, but this poem, simply takes my breath away. Awesome!
** I LOVE IT **
A beautiful poem, from a talented poet.
"Fleeting Moments" - I really love this one!
Thank You!
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