The story itself is passable, but... it seems like someone didn't know what a 3" dildo - diameter; not length! - can do to an untrained anus.
There is a difference between writing about your fantasies and typing unbelievable mess. At least TRY to make it believable. Well, live and learn.
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Anonymous02/22/14
Just plain horrible
I know this is fiction, But even fiction has to be in touch with reality. This is so far out there, it's laughable. Not worth the time spent reading it..
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Pathetic...
Pathetic. Not much else to say...
And bizarre, I think we need a thatescalatedquickly.jpg
Really
Really
About subtle distinctions
The story itself is passable, but... it seems like someone didn't know what a 3" dildo - diameter; not length! - can do to an untrained anus.
There is a difference between writing about your fantasies and typing unbelievable mess. At least TRY to make it believable. Well, live and learn.
Just plain horrible
I know this is fiction, But even fiction has to be in touch with reality. This is so far out there, it's laughable. Not worth the time spent reading it..
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