It's a good start to your erotic writing on this site. You have enough detail to carry the sex, and convey her emotion and want at the same time.
I look forward to your next effort.
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Anonymous01/07/14
Very realistic story
Captured the excitement and feelings of a fun fling. Having the right attitude and timing can make one night stand a very nice adventure.
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A Great One Pager
It's a good start to your erotic writing on this site. You have enough detail to carry the sex, and convey her emotion and want at the same time.
I look forward to your next effort.
Very realistic story
Captured the excitement and feelings of a fun fling. Having the right attitude and timing can make one night stand a very nice adventure.
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This really belongs in Erotic Couplings, not romance. If the couple don't even know each other's names...
Don't know each others names, its a hook up, not romance 1*
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