A Valentine Present

i loved it

this was the best story i have read in a long time and very well told i felt like i was right there and could fill my pussy gitting wet as the ladys in the story

Like alll the rest

It got me wet just like a ll the rest of your stories and audios...You are sooo talented and I thank you for sharing. Keep 'em cumming!!!

Juicy and nice

Utterly delightful, but I got stopped several times by things like:

It did not effect the results at all.

Effect is cause, affect is modify. Would that automatic mechanisms would point out the right their/they're/there and lose versus loose, but they don't yet do that. Too bad.

Great Counsling session

This is a juicy tale - both the tale and me. Great work please start again in '06

Me, me, me...!!!!

Oh gawd, could you do that to me sometime? That's the kind of story that gets me sooooooooo hot!

WOW

I enjoyed every bit of this story it got me extremely aroused, although i did get a bit confused when the names got mixed up, and it went from both of them wearing jeans to lisa wearing a skirt, but screw that, the story was FANTASTIC 10/10

Nice

Little story! It didn't arouse me like some of the other stories, but the concept is intriging.

A1

Very erotic.

Consider getting a copy editor

Good eroticism, but check out the little details before posting.

Good

Was good, but i was hoping for a threesome. Next chapter?

I did enjoy this story very much. It would be a better world if everyone could have mind blowing orgasms every time. Glad you like tall women, I'm 5' 6", and love to wear high heels. Most stories that men write make their women short. Anyway, I'm new to Literotica and love reading about mind control, can't wait to read and listen to your other stories.

Names in wrong places

You've interchanged Sara and Lisa a few times. Wishful thinking? :)

Hot story for sure.... but...

I was hoping while Sara was under, the hypnotist would be the one enjoying her body... Geez, she's lying on the floor naked, legs spread wide open and inviting.... how could a guy turn that down -- she could have been led to believe it was Chad doing it too.... maybe while Chad enjoyed Lisa..... Just sayin'

You very often confused the names of Sara and Lisa

Over all it was okay. Not terrific, but okay. It was very jerky and not a lot of reaction from the characters. There should be more emotion and description.