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by butters01/05/14

elegant

why 'in the chaste snow' rather than 'on chaste snow'? is it to say the bird's up in snowy branches rather than on the ground? only wondering, as i saw the image of the drop of blood as being on the snow.

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by Oldbear6301/06/14

Beautiful

And it could be perfect description. If you were in a different frame of mind would you have still seen it as a blemish? Could the snow then be a perfect backdrop for a beautiful spot of life? Huh. Sorry - don't know where I am going with that. Beautiful poem, 5'd

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