I like your story! You have an honest style. I hope you'll describe more of what "Julie" looks like--things such as eye color, color of your hair (including down there!), etc. Please go on....
I guess he didn't like it. However, I liked it as a first installment and as a second attempt at writing erotica. I hope the juices keep flowing to make this more than a one time wonder!
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Anonymous01/09/14
memories
Your story and i hope it is a true one brings back good memories when i was your age--seems like girls kept us guys in a state of blue ball all the time--please continue
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01/09/14
Yes!
Yes, please do continue! I really like the naturalistic, almost journal-like style, and would love to read more.
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Anonymous01/10/14
Yes Please
Great so far. Definitely continue. Although you are the author, so it's your call, my suggestion would be to pick up the pace a little. We have short attention spans.
There is a lot of potential in this story. I was a little disappointed that after such a lot of detail about dry humping, her first all the way blow job was glossed over in a single paragraph! Put a lot more detail into the sex for the next chapter and add more about Julie's feelings.
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Anonymous01/11/14
Why would you post all of this and not continue? Disappointing.
Most certainly......but a bit more recapping on what you have done so far....more detail of your emotional and physical feelings...slow it down a bit...take your time...
But it's a great yarn....and I am enjoying it.....thank you.
You got me. I want to hear more. Tease me slowly though. Tell me, if you remember all the details, about every step. The "dry humping" days brought back a lot of memories. The innocence, the rawness, the "off-the-charts" hormone levels! If this is not all true, you make it sound like it could be.
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please continue
I like your story! You have an honest style. I hope you'll describe more of what "Julie" looks like--things such as eye color, color of your hair (including down there!), etc. Please go on....
Anonymous
I guess he didn't like it. However, I liked it as a first installment and as a second attempt at writing erotica. I hope the juices keep flowing to make this more than a one time wonder!
memories
Your story and i hope it is a true one brings back good memories when i was your age--seems like girls kept us guys in a state of blue ball all the time--please continue
Yes!
Yes, please do continue! I really like the naturalistic, almost journal-like style, and would love to read more.
Yes Please
Great so far. Definitely continue. Although you are the author, so it's your call, my suggestion would be to pick up the pace a little. We have short attention spans.
Keep it up
There is a lot of potential in this story. I was a little disappointed that after such a lot of detail about dry humping, her first all the way blow job was glossed over in a single paragraph! Put a lot more detail into the sex for the next chapter and add more about Julie's feelings.
Why would you post all of this and not continue? Disappointing.
Continue....
Most certainly......but a bit more recapping on what you have done so far....more detail of your emotional and physical feelings...slow it down a bit...take your time...
But it's a great yarn....and I am enjoying it.....thank you.
You got me...
You got me. I want to hear more. Tease me slowly though. Tell me, if you remember all the details, about every step. The "dry humping" days brought back a lot of memories. The innocence, the rawness, the "off-the-charts" hormone levels! If this is not all true, you make it sound like it could be.
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