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by Ashesh901/05/14

Fallen cones'

Rebirth / re-incarnation perhaps in another shape or as another being ?!

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by butters01/05/14

very chilled out

quiet, pristine, the concept of the dreaming cones... love it. if i had to change anything, it'd only be to drop 'it's and go with 'fallen cones dreaming'. really lovely, complete image.

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by ishtat01/06/14

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Good and I 5'd it. Only jarring note is the word festooned. Don't think it really describes what hoar does. But a good'un.

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