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Valentine's Day Dinner

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by Anonymous01/21/14

Holy Fuck-What a Piece of CRAPULA!!!!

Holy FUCK! WHAT A GOD DAMNED,STUPID PIECE OF UTTER CRAPULA!!
To THE JERKOFF WHO WROTE THIS GARBAGE-GO BACK TO PLAYING WITH YOUR SCHMUCK AND THEN HAVE YOUR BALLS CASTRATED!!!!!!!!

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by Anonymous01/21/14

Hubby lost his mind somewhere

When his wife became a cheating slut. Get the divorce. You'll get the kids. She's pregnant by another man. Split the business. Let them buy you out. Take your kids and move a LONG ways away. Done. Sticking around like you had him do? This should have been posted in fetish since you made him a spineless, willing cuckold, in bed with his wife's lover. BARF!

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by Harryin VA01/21/14

is the author a mentally retarded moron.?

yes.... Other than saying he cried like when he was 5 years old and saying he was "done" whar EXACTLY did he do..?

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by Harryin VA01/21/14

56 comments and only 1 thought this a good story

mattblack theuk asshole

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by LordSlamdawgg01/21/14

obliging 2 a fault

This is well written although I wouldn't deem this a great story. The narrator didn't get proactive until the very end. I see the author as half trolling, half exploring his novice voice. Hopefully in future stories, his latter inclination will win out. I would wonder how the narrator was a success in business, but so passive on homefront.

Definitely reminiscent of MM . Sigh.

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by tazz31701/21/14

HE SAID IT ALL EXCEPT

NO MAS AND ADIOS, tk u mlj lv nv

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by Anonymous01/21/14

this one is too sad

the husband is drifting in the desert... Never to be found... I can imagine his mind's working and processing life... remember the brain is the hardware and the mind is the software... one or both are truly mucked up

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by 1Thinkingman01/21/14

I should explain

why I gave this story a one star. Never sit on the fence. Here we have a non-male lead. Why? Simply put by staying with his whore and babysitting while she goes over to dickheads he shows that he condones her actions. Men, real men do not act in this manner. If they are going to keep the bitch for the children they at least require the sacrifice of the relationship with dickhead. Or they go the other real route to happiness and get a divorce try for custody of the children(which almost never happens) and move on with their lives. This non-male is a willing cuck. That makes the story unpalatable and thus a *.

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by Chagrined01/21/14

Not a very good story unless you are Russian. :)

This has no one to cheer for, no one to hope for. The woman is a bitch, the other man is a dickhead and the male lead is a hopelees wimp.

If the story was too be believed, the male lead say not to feel sad for him but then goes on to sound like Eeyore saying "thanks for noticing me." He wonders why there are no more women willing to say for more than 1 or 2 dates. Why should they? He has already proven he is not much of a man?

I can't understand why people write such stories.

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by BDEarth01/21/14

Not in the real world

I don't see this as a realistic scenario; husband was very weak, although boyfriend didn't appear to be a prick about it. Wife's character, change that to lack of character, was that of a very selfish individual.
I gave it a 2 because it didn't suck as bad as some of the stories I've read.

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by goon198501/21/14

Kind of depressing.

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by Anonymous01/22/14

AS he said,

his wife is smarter than he is. He clearly does not get he is paying the bills, raising the children, and not being loved. Clearly he is a stupid man married to a selfish woman. You have created a character in a shorter space that would be admired MM himself. Welcome to the club: another writer who just cannot make intelligent characters. Most of these ify writers reside in the LW section. You should feel right at home. And if you are married, I hope you smarter than your characters.

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by Anonymous01/22/14

Lame

I don't mind strong female characters but this is just stupid. There needs to be a reason for the husband to put up with this.

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by Anonymous01/22/14

Runner up for dumbest story written: "stupid is as stupid does"

You never told us where she keeps your balls.
You obviously don't have any.
I can't even feel sorry for the dumbass husband.
To quote F. Gump: stupid is as stupid does.

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by Anonymous01/31/14

Silly me

I was hoping for romance, love, happiness, not depression. So much for Valentines Day. If this is what you think readers want for this holiday you deserve what you get.

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by tae35200102/05/14

Good story but sad

started out good, but as this so called twist developed, I saw a cockold and wimp story I could not take. it rates a 3 because I cannot see the erotic side of a wife desiring another man until she gets pregnant? In my book since both were not equally willing, this should not have happend. Divorce, then have friends with benefits... now you have kids calling the lover uncle? This is why I am a full supporter of laws that protect spouses from their cheating spouses.. try a 70/30 split and the victim of a cheater gets custody and the house.. see if these passions continue.. my guess it would not be worth it... I would even like a 80/20 split alot more.

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by Anonymous03/17/14

Why does he care what Erica likes or doesn't like?

You enumerate all the reasons he doesn't care about Erica. Why isn't he divorcing her? Why hasn't he gathered enough information to make sure he gets full custody? Why hasn't he checked to see if the other kids are really his? Given her level of disrespect, why hasn't he told ALL of her family and friends what she's doing? Just too many holes in this mess to be a good story. If you put a second part to it and finish, maybe you'll have something. As it sits, this pile of garbage isn't worth reading.

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by Anonymous06/24/14

Well then finish the story.

My biggest complaint about stories on this site is that authors don't put endings to them. YES! I can use my imagination. But that's not why I read these stories. I want someone to TELL me a story. I don't want to fill in the blanks. It isn't cute. It isn't clever. This story fits into the "unfinished" category. Why is he still married? Why is she cheating (other than to get more sex)? FINISH THE DAMN STORY!

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by rixels06/05/15

Makes me Wonder

The people in this story make me wonder why the murder rate isn't even higher than it is.

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by impo_6106/23/15

The bullshit about...

The bullshit about: "She is my spouse, my business partner, and my best friend." She was none of those things!!! Not even a good mother!!! That's why this story is so out of context!!! 1*

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by Anonymous06/23/15

Something missing here.

What a selfish bitch! There are some things that you can take, and some that you can't. She's his best friend? Really? They have children, but she'd rather have fun and orgasms rather than be a mother.to them. Then, the ultimate act of disrespect, getting pregnant with another man's child. Long before that, he should have left her and taken the children. The lover gets the pussy, and he gets the responsibility. However, good premise. It should have been fleshed out much more to develop the premise.

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by Anonymous08/19/15

she lied, you get a fucking divorce.

You are not married anymore, stupid story.

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by Anonymous08/20/15

You're kidding, right?

Nobody but nobody, except an absolute freak, would put up with this. Every decent story has to have at least some scintilla of believability. This guy's not even a wimp. To call him that would be a compliment.

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by Anonymous09/10/15

Made me mad and cried

I dont know who you are or if your still reading this but I would like to meet you and talk I'll send a private msg

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by sinsational8312/30/15

really ???

This is the most stupidest story I have ever read on here. First of all, NO MAN would ever put up with that crap, and do nothing about it. Regardless of the fact of the kids and the business partner shit. and since he said that she or they flaunt their crap in front of the kids he should have somehow recorded that and took the kids well... his kids and packed them up and left the two assholes, filed for a divorce, and told the whore and her lover Mark to kiss his ass. And Mark can support his own bastard kid.

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by sinsational8301/05/16

Are you serious

That's it ? that's the end of your story ? you F#@KING moron glad you quit writing. but if you do decide to write again I hope its better than this fuck at least finish the damn thing. A good -2 stars for this shit.

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by Anonymous11/24/16

wtf

Grab your kids after gutting everything and split. Loans on business leaving no value. Max out line of credit on house. Take all money on saving and checking after letting them go on a weekend getaway. Etc... leave the country would be best... never contact old life again.....

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by Anonymous07/24/17

Man up. She's not worth the pain.

The story was effective and pretty well put together. The narrator needs to realize that financial issues should not be the reason to stay married to someone who obviously doesn't love or respect you.
Trying to stop the bleeding by finding a woman willing to cheat with you is futile. There is a world of single moms out there, looking for you once you cut the line to the Titanic.

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