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by Anonymous01/19/14

Older woman and young man.

Since I was a young man years ago, sex between an older woman and a young man has really been my favorite fantasy. I lost my virginity at 15 to a woman of 38 and it was the best sex I've ever had,

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by Anonymous01/19/14

Rape.

A rape story. Mom is a whore for allowing it to happen. Rob is not a true friend of James.

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by Anonymous01/20/14

Rob and James Mother

Give that sexy Rob some hair on that sexy chest! She can see his hairy crotch and the hair on his legs -- give him the sexy chest hair for her touching!

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by amorone01/20/14

WOW I love that story

Thanks for another believable tale. I love your use of the English language and the realism of the text. It's great to hear it from a woman's perspective.

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GOOD, BUT

The rape part of the story was too much. I question that a woman being forced would react in such a calm way. Treating any woman I know like that would be like slipping up on and grabbing a sleeping cat; you'd find yourself with a handful of teeth and claws. He could have spent the time to woo the woman and your story would have been a solid 5.

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by Kiwilass01/21/14

Apologies...

...to anyone who was put off by the 'resistance' theme.
It wasn't intended to be a 'rape' story. As I was writing it I thought it was more a story of a woman fighting her own feelings of right and wrong. Stella had spent the entire summer masturbating to images of Rob in her mind. Her reluctance to let him have sex with her was really just because he was so young.
I never thought for a minute that he ever forced her. He just read the situation clearly and pushed her to admit her desires.
And yes you're right Stella's a very strong woman. She wouldn't have tolerated his behaviour if she didn't want him. A swift punch to the groin would've ended any desire he had for her IF she'd really wanted to get away.
In future I'll be sure to place a foreword in front of any stories that I think have any surprises.
Thanks everyone for your feedback.

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by Anonymous03/08/14

What are you all blabering about rape? I read no rape but a woman who wanted to fuck so badly. She just struggled with her conscience en I bet she even loved to struggle a bit. I for once LOVED IT. Please write more stories like this with older women and younger guys.

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by Anonymous01/14/15

Powerful

Intense and gripping. A wonderful rendition of the inner struggle between the call of lust and the warning bells of social conditioning... thank you.

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