All Comments on 'Fay Song'

You can write like the old masters.

sweet waters :rose:

written to suit your stories, and as such should be viewed with that in mind.

typo 'devine'?

Almost feel like I'm intruding when I opened this poem.

Enchanted Forest of Harry's Image-ination !!! High 5-ed .

The first two stanze have a heartfelt feeling of protection and distance, and the third creates an interesting scene in my mind. The fourth, however, I was distracted by the rhymes, to be honest. Four in a row is too neat (for my taste). But then, this poem isn't for me. So... :-D