by sirhugs
Pendulous overuse. This story was straight up stupid. Can't decide if I want to laugh at this joke of a story or cry for the pathetic limp dick author that wrote it.
Keep it up!
I rarely bother to leave comments but I felt I had to point out that you are a horrible writer and this story was almost laughably bad
Sanzamour and I seem to be in the minority here.
I think this is a very good story even if legally banging your stepdaughter is not really incest. Lots of fun though.
All those detractors should check out your full list of stories to see that they, in fact are the minority. You've got a 4+ rating on every one. Pretty damn good.
You've got a great imagination and a real talent for pornography. That's a compliment!
Bill
An older man finding a young woman who gets hot over watersports? Well written to! What's not to love? I certainly loved it!
Loved the story... Better if it was his actual daughter, but get how it had to be his step daughter based on how you meant the story to flow. Very hot and not too long which some stories here tend to be...
No close blood relation so no inbreeding risk.
Therefore no taboo of incest.
Amazing how many find it hard to grasp this simple concept.
There are so many categories out there but for some reason they do have to drag it into incest/taboo!!!
Look it up before you comment. Blood doesn't matter. Just like it is still incest if you are adopted.
I loved it. A bit short but I enjoy golden showers mostly giving them recieving. Never been peed on. But love pissing on a man's cock and face while hes eating me