Princess and the Pee

Pendulous overuse. This story was straight up stupid. Can't decide if I want to laugh at this joke of a story or cry for the pathetic limp dick author that wrote it.

I really enjoyed this...You didn't seem to miss a detail, and you moved very smoothly from start to finish. I want to read more!

Keep it up!

Why...

..is watersports an attraction?

Lmao

I rarely bother to leave comments but I felt I had to point out that you are a horrible writer and this story was almost laughably bad

Can we be wrong?

Sanzamour and I seem to be in the minority here.
I think this is a very good story even if legally banging your stepdaughter is not really incest. Lots of fun though.
All those detractors should check out your full list of stories to see that they, in fact are the minority. You've got a 4+ rating on every one. Pretty damn good.
You've got a great imagination and a real talent for pornography. That's a compliment!
Bill

A Great Piss Story!

An older man finding a young woman who gets hot over watersports? Well written to! What's not to love? I certainly loved it!

Great job!!

Loved the story... Better if it was his actual daughter, but get how it had to be his step daughter based on how you meant the story to flow. Very hot and not too long which some stories here tend to be...