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Williams' Birthday

byLucyslovers©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/11/14

Get a Life

I think you're preaching in the wrong place! Just enjoy the story for what it is.

I loved it

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by MitchFraell01/11/14

Great descriptions

As a letter it gives an insight into the physical treatment a woman desires from her lover from her point of view. Rare on Lit. It's good for me.

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by Anonymous01/12/14

Lot of feeling

So very descriptive and showing a true love between two people whether it is fantasy or in true life. Something that can easily happen when two lovers meet for the very first time. Keep it up Lucy (and William)

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by curiousdreamer5101/12/14

Well Done

What a nice description of a memorable birthday gift. I enjoyed the build up and knowing a little as I do.....I found it very arousing. I hope that you continue writing and sharing your intimate thoughts.

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